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Teenagehood

July 25, 2013
By Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson


And through the teenage years
Youll come to know my hopes and fears
Whats brings down a waterfall of tears
Whos face and by what grace I came to learn
to defend my honour With a mace
Win by any means Any race
How to learn from my mistakes
For my disheartened sake
So we dont break
Have a heart
Dont start On me
I know ive done wrong
But im trying to be strong
Ive been pulled left and right
In and out of sight
Sometimes ill be gone
For quite awhile Running the roads
Trying to figure out my style
Dont give up On me
Im trying not to
Cant you see
This life is tough
Im in the rough
At the end ill be buff
But right now Im weak
I dont know how Ill reach the peak
To take a break
Put my mistake
Behind me
Move on I cant pretend i didnt see
The ugliness
This world can give
The innocence It takes away
Ill stay but not for long
Im not that strong
The temptation of the sirens song
Calling us to Take it easy
Be greasy
Give up when theres no hope in sight
When theres no chance of light
Take flight
But ill fight as long as i can
As long as i can stand.


The author's comments:
Im being lazy with the grammar, sorry guys but this one is fine i think. i think we'll all be fine, given time.

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on Jun. 11 2016 at 6:02 am
ScarletIce4695 GOLD, Karachi, Other
13 articles 1 photo 57 comments
All ur poems r just awesome...!

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 1:03 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

thanks for the advice, ill work on it!

HazelGrace said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 12:40 pm
It's real and your wrting style is pretty good. But the ryhming sounds forced in some places and the grammar is very distracting

on Jul. 29 2013 at 1:54 pm
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

u really rock i love it and all teenagers do : )

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 12:52 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

Thankyou guys! It means a lot. 

on Jul. 28 2013 at 7:06 pm
DarknessHasFallen GOLD, Broomfield, Colorado
12 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm fine. I just feel like I'm shattered into hundred of little shards of glass and I'm going to hurt everybody who loves me.

i completely agree with grace and also i loved the siren part!! sorry weird and totally unhelpful, well i just ... really liked it  

on Jul. 28 2013 at 7:00 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I really like the flow and how you did it, i think you nailed teenagehood brilliantly. 5/5 stars