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The End

July 17, 2013
By CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
24 articles 6 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was." - Unknown


I'm afraid of what's to come,
Of what will happen,
When we go our separate ways,
Will it be my fault?
Or will fate decide,
That we're just not right for each other,
I'm afraid to see you go,
To watch you leave,
And never come back,
Will you miss me?
Or will you find someone better,
And forget about me entirely,
I'm afraid that this will be over,
That we'll pretend it never happened,
Will you regret us breaking apart?
Or will you erase me from your memory completely,
And move on with your head held high,
I'm afraid of losing you,
I'm afraid of the end.


The author's comments:
This poem is about finding that one person that you know in heart you're destined to be with, but realizing that the future of the relationship doesn't look too promising.

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on Aug. 13 2013 at 1:21 pm
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
24 articles 6 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was." - Unknown

Thanks :) I feel the same about your poem. 

OldYoungOne said...
on Aug. 8 2013 at 4:43 pm
I can connect with this poem very much so and I think that the themes are little different from "Stop the Time". I like the almostpleading nature I get form this poem. I myself have felt this many times over and I enjoy the fact that you have put words the feelings I cannot express.

on Aug. 6 2013 at 2:22 pm
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
24 articles 6 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was." - Unknown

Wow, thanks for the advice :) I've been trying to work on that this summer. The poem I have pending right now is the most well written one I have. But anyway, thanks, I really appreciate it :)

on Aug. 5 2013 at 5:43 pm
Superhero_Fan SILVER, Tomorrowland, California
7 articles 1 photo 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Impossible; for How many people did you know who refracted your own light to you?” - Fahrenheit 451

I loved how you portrayed her emotions throughout the poem! It was very clear and well written. All I would suggest, is to use your senses. 'The hot tears I knew would follow', is an example of touch. Or, 'the soft sweet smell of the rose would soon blow away with the wind, just as he will in time'. Great job, Sam! Keep it up!