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Come away with me

July 5, 2013
By JadeRaven SILVER, Versailles, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When he shall die, take him and cut him out in little stars,<br /> And he shall make the face of heaven so fine<br /> That all the world will be in love with the night<br /> And pay no worship to the garish sun.&quot; -Shakespeare

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Baby bring me up and set me
down
Breathe and hold me until i fall
apart.
Reaching for your soul, I take in your eyes
So big and full of all that is beautiful

Oh love
Run away, Run away
From this big world
fall with me and Ill make you
forever mine.
We'll mingle the colors of our souls,
And let them paint the sunset.

Oh baby, ill stay no matter what you say
let me fix your withered heart
and bring light into your
footsteps,
So i look and search
I look and search for your arrows of loss left behind

© Alexandra K., Chicago, IL

The author's comments:
I honestly don't know whats going on in this one. I feel like there is some good verses but then other parts it is all over the place. Feedback?
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