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A Cracked Window

June 24, 2013
By sparrow-at-flight BRONZE, Mill Valley, California
sparrow-at-flight BRONZE, Mill Valley, California
2 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is mind-traveling, destination unknown."


The world is a cracked window
Time is lost and nothing remains
The view is broken
And so is the past



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on Jul. 10 2014 at 8:32 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Short or not, It doesn't matter cuz a poem has a msg to share and i believe this poem has left an impact on everyone who read it so mission accompliched ;) Great Job 5/5 :D

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on Jul. 9 2014 at 12:50 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

Short but effective. It left an impact. Good job!

on Jul. 13 2013 at 2:12 pm
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
15 articles 16 photos 292 comments

Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

i agree with Jade. great job!

on Jul. 4 2013 at 12:45 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is awesome :) short but deep. 5/5