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He became my world
June 13, 2013
I met a boy once who morphed my world,
He took my hands and led me through the mysteries of the land,
I saw beauty,
I saw bliss,
I saw hurt, sorrow, and anguish
But most of all I saw love
And though I can't touch him I can imagine how it must feel to be held with such passion,
But I can only admire from afar, captivated in thoughts of dreams and great wishes,
Come to me my love and we'll be consummated
Forever
Connected
And bound by affections.
© Brian B.,Highland Village, TX
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hayhaywhaley GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2013 at 1:58 pm
Thanks for the idea! I only write what flows from my heart, I can't force anything out. So what pops into my head is what I write on paper. But you have just inspired me to write a poem about him beings muse. Thank you so much.(:
I like how he keeps you writing. It would be cool if you added that to your piece that way it would sound bettter. I love the line about 'admiring from afar' because when people say I stalk people that's my comeback.... lols, I don't really stalk people... that much. But yeah. I like this 5 stars :)
hayhaywhaley GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2013 at 5:35 pm
Thank you so much! I love to hear it when people can relate (:
Solumicecast GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2013 at 2:45 pm
Good job I loved this poem
Solumicecast GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2013 at 2:42 pm
I like your poem. I have a guy I like and he never stops talking about me. It just nice to know he cares
hayhaywhaley GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2013 at 11:32 am
I'm so glad you can relate! Thank you
Dancergirl224 GOLD said...
on Jun. 13 2013 at 10:44 pm
I LOVE THIS!!!! I totally understand how you feel, I feel the exact same way for a guy that i know who went into the military. Amazing job writing this poem :)
