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Life.

May 23, 2013
By ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran


Life
A never ending game
Full of fears
Drenched with tears
A smile opens a child's eyes
But do they know the torture that waits
The screams that they will wail
How can they tell
Welcome to hell
When no one awaits them
An orphan born alone forever
No mom, no dad, no home



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on Mar. 21 2014 at 10:00 am
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

It is nowhere close to perfect

on Mar. 20 2014 at 8:19 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Yet another perfect poem!

on Mar. 18 2014 at 12:54 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Thank you so much!!!

on Mar. 11 2014 at 6:53 pm
BatmansMyJam SILVER, Bolivar, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 10 comments
I like how the message is displayed. Nice work!(: Right in the feels.

on Mar. 10 2014 at 3:45 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Thank you!!

on Mar. 1 2014 at 9:07 pm
PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
11 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. And then you die." ~Jacob (Twilight)

Rosalynne, I like this poem a lot! Great work, it's pretty deep. Keep it up!