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Empathy

May 20, 2013
By GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
16 articles 5 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
My love life is a mess; It's like a puzzle piece that doesn't fit no where. - by: Gabriel Meroli


Pain is not only a thing
That the body feels.
Is the sadness, the hate, the struggle,
That you don't want to feel.

Why is it so difficult
To help people with pain;
But when you are in the place
you all the time complain.

That's why you need to wear
Someone else's shoes.
Before you say a thing,
And cause them so much...pain.



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on May. 23 2013 at 4:03 pm
GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
16 articles 5 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
My love life is a mess; It's like a puzzle piece that doesn't fit no where. - by: Gabriel Meroli

thanks :) The point of the ending (like that )  it's like the introduction of another poem that I am waiting to be approved ... when they approve it you'll understand why the ending is like that ;) Thanks for you support <3

on May. 23 2013 at 3:51 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

i really like this cause its relatable and i agree with jade the ending could be stronger

on May. 22 2013 at 8:31 pm
GabrielMeroli GOLD, Sabana Grande, Other
16 articles 5 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
My love life is a mess; It's like a puzzle piece that doesn't fit no where. - by: Gabriel Meroli

thanks :') I'll try for the next time (poem).. ! <3

on May. 22 2013 at 8:17 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I like this a lot, but I think the ending could be stronger