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Hold You

April 30, 2013
By Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes


I will hold you,
And I won't let you go.
I will hold through all,
Be it,
Rain,
Snow,
Ice,
Wind,
Cold,
Heat,
Or Death,
I will hold you.



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on May. 27 2013 at 2:29 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Okay, I'll check out the song in a while.

on May. 27 2013 at 2:04 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Oh, hello! The title and picture completely go with each other! I sometimes find it difficult to find pictures on Teenink to go with my poems and I spend a lot of time trying to find the right one. Anyways, I enjoyed how simple it was, it delicate. The emphasis of one worded lines was really smart, I LOVE when writers do that. And I see you've done it again, using the symbol of winter in here. You made a simple little poem dark, but with the last line you lightened the mood and brought back the love. I enjoyed this, it was sweet and deep saying that you'd hold this person even through death. Good job. And since you and I are always talking about songs, I figured I might bring this up.. In the third line you said, 'I will hold you through it all' which reminded me of a song called 'Your Guardian Angel' by The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus. So, maybe you wanna check it out?

on May. 24 2013 at 5:25 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thank you!

on May. 24 2013 at 4:03 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

Sounds a bit like the mailman: "Neither rain nor sleet nor snow..." :D This is simple and to the point, but I'm with OldYoungOne, it does need more descriptive, vibrant words to really send your emotions across. Otherwise, great idea and I hope you have a great day!

on May. 24 2013 at 12:25 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thank you!

OldYoungOne said...
on May. 24 2013 at 11:48 am
This is a an okay poem in my opinion. I could possibly  ask for a little more a creative interpretation. Maybe too direct and blunt with the message. Although, I did like how you space your words out out give emphasis on the subject. Good job.