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The Five Senses of Death

April 30, 2013
By BeccaLynch729 BRONZE, Winchester, Indiana
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BeccaLynch729 BRONZE, Winchester, Indiana
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"What is better - to be born good, or to overcome your evil nature through great effort?"

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Low moans,
pain whistling through gritted teeth,
the sound of a monitor slowly faltering.

Silent tears,
staining the sheets,
mournful visitors gathered around the bedside.

Dry mouth,
with a faint taste of blood,
a mixture that brings unpleasantness.

Stench of morphine,
perspiration on rushing figures,
mingle together in a flurry of chaos.

Cold flesh,
life lines coming to a halt,
can this truly be the end?

© Jacob W., Oklahoma City, OK

The author's comments:
Last year, my English teacher wanted us to write a poem that involved all five senses. She said it could involve any topic, and I chose Death simply because it is easy for me to convey my ideas on what Death is like for any of the senses. As cliche as this topic is, I enjoy writing about it. This is obviously very short, but it was supposed to be. this was a fun piece to write though and I hope others can enjoy it.
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