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My Heart to the Wind

April 29, 2013
By Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes


I stand alone this night,
Singing my heart to the wind.
I wish upon this star,
Hoping to see you again.
I hear you call out my name,
A single voice lost to the wind.
Even as my heart does cry,
Even as the world keeps going,
I sing my heart out to the wind,
To see you again.
If I saw you this night,
Then I would know for sure,
That my heart belongs to the wind.
I stand alone this night,
Singing my heart out to the wind.
I wish upon this star,
Hoping to see you again.



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on Jun. 21 2013 at 11:04 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thank you, Jade!

on Jun. 21 2013 at 11:04 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I agree with E.J., a little too repetitive, but I see what you're trying to do here. That aside, I think your vocabulary was great and overall it was very beautiful :) great job!

on May. 5 2013 at 4:28 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thank you!

on May. 5 2013 at 11:21 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

I am just so sorry that this is so confusing! I was just so excited and just know that I "really" liked this.

on May. 4 2013 at 8:47 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Okay, I will call the forum The Valley of The Dolls in the Fiction & Short Story area.

on May. 4 2013 at 8:32 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

I usually use a forum when I collab with people. So, you can make a forum! And haha, that's alright.

on May. 4 2013 at 8:26 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Also, the poetry that I use in the novels that I write is usally pretty random.

on May. 4 2013 at 7:18 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Okay! I'm working on a sample chapter now. Is there any other way that I can contact you so that we can trade the chapters back and forth to incroprate the various elements together?

on May. 4 2013 at 5:45 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Okay, thank you!

on May. 4 2013 at 4:01 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

No, thank YOU for all the lovely compliments and such. Absolutely! Just let me know what you were thinking of and I can get on it.. and how wonderful! I have never had anyone use my work as inspiration for their own.

on May. 4 2013 at 3:34 pm
E.J.Mathews GOLD, International Falls, Minnesota
19 articles 2 photos 145 comments
This poem was very nice, and sounded beautiful. For me, it got too repetitive. Repetition isn't a bad thing in peoms, but I felt that towards the last lines, I was just reading the same thing over again.

on May. 4 2013 at 2:18 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thank you on both accounts! The novel idea that I have is actually based off of The Valley of the Dolls, and I was hoping that you would write some poetry for it. 

on May. 4 2013 at 1:36 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

Such a beautfiul and singular piece..I have read much here and there is a lot on this topic but none so uniquely and sweetly and serenely and silently put forward. I love this poem. Truly. It sings to me and I visualized it all in my head... A scene something read between the lines too..You standing there on top of a cliff, kinda reminded me of Pocahontas' song to in a way but yet it holds it own ground. And then sighing and singing and the wind blowing your dress and you hair whipping and the most beautiful trees, and the scent of mud after the rain, the life of everything around just melds and the vision is alive. This only tells how good your imagery was even though there was little, it was enough to create so much more.  I loved the fact that you repeated the verse too... Beautfiul. I'm happy that I got the chance to read it :)))) Love, Saphira.

on May. 4 2013 at 12:09 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

OH! I just read a comment you left asking if I would like to collaborate with you on a novel! I think that is a wonderful idea and I would love to!

on May. 4 2013 at 11:04 am
BorderlineGenius777 SILVER, Lewiston, Idaho
7 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If all our misfortunes were laid in one common heap, whence everyone must take an equal portion, most would be content to take their own and depart."- Socrates

I like it. I'm going through a few problems now and I can sort of relate to this a little. excellent poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.

on May. 4 2013 at 10:33 am
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there! The more work of yours I read the more pleased I truly am. Each time something of yours is posted, I am thoroughly impressed. I like the way you wrote this, it almost came off as a tiny song! You are very good with repetition. You know how to evenly place it and not over-do it. Your rhymes are really good! I love the title.. it seems very pretty to me.. almost like a warm day when that small trickle of sweat rolls down and then the wind blows by and you just know that you are happy right there in that moment. The little things make all the difference. I love the line, 'I wish upon a star'! Great job!

on May. 3 2013 at 7:24 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thank you, and I will!

on May. 3 2013 at 7:12 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

Hi there! Great job! I loved the repetition and all the metaphors. It painted a really pretty picture in my mind. Keep rockin!

on May. 3 2013 at 5:49 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thank you!

on May. 3 2013 at 4:35 pm
Firefaerie SILVER, Austin, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not pity the dead. pity the living, and above all, those who live without love" - J.K Rowling
"There's always another secret" -Brandon Sanderson

i like this, if somebody that was just recovering from a breakup i think this would make them cry, but in a good way :)