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Thunderstorm

April 22, 2013
By Shrike99 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
Shrike99 BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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I stare at the huge black clouds as they billow up from the mountains,
Threatening to block out the sun.
They drift slowly, lumbering towards the city like dull, thick-headed giants.

They dump rain down on the mountains,
which flow to the rushing river.
The rain is a visual mark of the storm's speed.
Where the rain goes, the storm goes,
and where the storm goes, the rain goes.

BOOM! The clouds unleash their fury upon the city below, sending pulses containing millions of volts of electricity zooming down to the earth.

BOOM! I sit in the living room, my heart racing as I observe the storm zealously.

BOOM! The sun has set.
BOOM! Darkness has taken over.
BOOM! The lightning lights up the world for a brief moment
Leaving a white hot imprint on my retina,
And depriving me of my sight.

I blunder my way about,
Bumping into a foot stool,
Stepping on the dog's tail.
I hear another blast, and want to hide my face in the pillows of the couch that I know is there,
But I cannot find it,
For I am blind,
With awe.


The author's comments:
I got the inspiration for this poem from the annual trips I take to Albuquerque each year to visit family. Here in Oregon, we're lucky to get a few wimpy thunderstorms a year. In New Mexico, they get really amazing thunderstorms that are WAY better than the ones in Oregon. I also wrote this poem because I feel that I have some deep connection to thunderstorms. They make me all excited and hyper when they're approaching, but when they are directly overhead, I tend to shy away from being outside for any length of time. Especially during the middle of the night.

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