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little dove

April 22, 2013
By aliciasmit BRONZE, Brooklyn Center, Minnesota
aliciasmit BRONZE, Brooklyn Center, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"no matter how hard life gets, i will always be there for you."


Dove of happiness,
Dove of hope
Live your life,
Away from the rope
Little dove
Small and sweet
It’s so sad
To see you weep
Why are you so sad?
Little dove of life.
Is it really that bad?
So that you live in strife
Oh dove,
Why can’t you see.
Its love,
As it will always be.
In life it’s hard,
So true.
With love a card,
For you.


The author's comments:
i wrote this peice for fun. i do that to let any hidden emotions out.

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on Apr. 24 2013 at 12:32 pm
evalash PLATINUM, Jennings, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
love is a gamble

Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Apr. 23 2013 at 7:28 pm
LayneCat SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
“To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all.”
― Oscar Wilde

I love this! So short and sweet.

on Apr. 23 2013 at 3:36 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

Good metaphor, a descent rhyme scheme, keep up the good work

on Apr. 23 2013 at 12:25 pm
k8husted PLATINUM, Central Point, Oregon
27 articles 3 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bliss Cavendar:(Whip it 2009) The last time I wore skates, they had
Barbies on them.

I actually love this. Using the dove which is actually supposed to sybolize love but symbolizes sadness and life instead is genius!! Keep writing!