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Poems About Rain

April 14, 2013
By OurVoices PLATINUM, Merrimac, Massachusetts
OurVoices PLATINUM, Merrimac, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It takes courage to grow up and turn out to be who you really are" - e.e. cummings

Almost a feeling.
Almost a feeling rain is near.
The sigh from an angel on high.
Almost a whisper in the ear
of someone who could still care.
Care about love.
Care about life.
Care about almost a feeling of rain.

As the Gods weep for our pain.
Our pain that is only our own.
We built up our walls and turned,
turned our hearts, my own
away from the rain.
Would never suspect it is here.
The wall keeps its cool kisses from me.
Only a feeling.
A feeling of rain.
Almost a feeling of rain is here.

The author's comments:
I Wrote this in class the other day. its just a little poem that i wrote looking out the window at the rain, instead of doing my math homework.

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on Nov. 16 2013 at 9:37 pm
Deej6595 BRONZE, Billerica, Massachusetts
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This is a very good poem. I like the feeling that you portrrayed throughout the whole poem. This is perfect for the springtime. I can't wait to read it again.

on Apr. 26 2013 at 10:27 pm
WolfsBane SILVER, Kerrville, Texas
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I like it. It's very neat.

on Apr. 19 2013 at 5:58 pm
LegendInTheMaking GOLD, Oswego,
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nice poem... maybe you could check out my stuff too... please and thank you! :)

chubbycheeks said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 11:40 am
good work hey! i like it........ keep going on..... all the best.