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April 14, 2013
By MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
26 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right"
I also have another "Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts"

It only reflects the bad.
And never shows the good.
Only shows my weakness.
But never wants to share the strengths.
Always wanted me to lose what I have.
And gain what I don’t.
Telling me I need to change.
Showing me all that I need to change.
Never being the good friend in telling me I’m beautiful.
Never saying you don’t need to change.
Never giving the satisfaction to people to know they’re beautiful.

The author's comments:
So many people become a victim of thinking that they are fat and not beautiful. I was one, but I have been getting over it. This poem was to tell people that they are beautiful no matter what. Always have confidence and don't let anyone tell you differently.

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on Jun. 26 2013 at 11:59 pm
artist-today SILVER, Alberta, Other
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't argue with an idiot they will bring you down to their level and beat you with experience."
-Mark Twain

It was good, had a good voice and meaning. I like how you spoke to the person. I think it was missing something though, I'm not sure exactly but I felt as if there could have been more, like more stuff you could have said.