Strength | Teen Ink


April 9, 2013
By Emotsye PLATINUM, Syracuse, New York
Emotsye PLATINUM, Syracuse, New York
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I never knew words could be so strong but then yours carried my breath in one hand and my heart in the other.

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Julia K. said...
on Apr. 23 2013 at 3:57 pm
Thank you for your feedback! I did actually make this into a longer poem which you can see here:

on Apr. 19 2013 at 4:08 pm
delilah_manhatten SILVER, Chester, Montana
8 articles 5 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
They love to tell you stay inside the lines but something's better on the other side. Johnaten Mayer

I love this! It is very powerfull. I think it is a beautiful peice but see it as a hook. I think you should make this part of a larger piece or poem. 

on Apr. 18 2013 at 1:17 pm
CrystalAngelDol SILVER, Queens, New York
7 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never tell your problems to anyone...20% don't care and the other 80% are glad you have them.
- Lou Holtz

 nice, but why is it so short?