Unbreakable Love

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I didn’t break any commandment, I didn’t make any crime

Yes, I love a women who older than just my age,
Why do people say no? why the closer ones say-

‘’ you’re taking the path of suffer’’, ‘’you are a great fool’’
But, how can I be a fool, when with her love this heart is vigorous & fool?

Was the prophet a fool?

Was Shakespeare a fool?


Is Obama a fool?
No, I guess not at all, you people are inhuman, acting like an animal
Love, formed with faith, relation, care& understanding given by the god

Love is not an object to buy

When you are into this you just have to learn how to survive

As I did, doing & will do until this war ends

My love, my romance with this girl,

is something that everyone would desire to have
together with my lover we can be vanished deep in the sky

the sky doesn’t care if she’s bigger than me
we’re like a pair of dove flying around & making love

in the heaven we’re the symbol of love


its our love that cant be forgotten forever

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Elisa39This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 11:06 am
I think it's a really nice poem! (You could use some capitalization though.)  Great job!!!
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