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His Hands

April 4, 2013
By Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green


His smooth hands
Find their way to hers.
Holding,
Calming,
Easing.
Gentle yet rough,
Soothing yet strong.
They waited in the shadows,
Until she provided light.

She says he can
Transform the world
With just one flick
Of his wrist.
With those loving hands,
He held her heart
And laced it
With his.


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Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jun. 10 2013 at 12:16 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Thanks u soooooooooo much! :) U r too

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jun. 10 2013 at 12:16 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Thanks so much! :)

on Apr. 23 2013 at 12:08 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

Kyuuuutteeee

on Apr. 16 2013 at 8:57 am
Alex_Writer GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the long run, we shape our lives, and we shape ourselves. The process never ends until we die. And the choices we make are ultimately our own responsibility." ~Eleanor Roosevelt

WOW.  When I read your poems I wonder how you can do it, how you can pick out the right words and make it flow perfectly.  Keep up the good work!

on Apr. 15 2013 at 4:47 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I agree i can feel the emotions and its amazing like always you are gonna go far i can see that clearly

on Apr. 15 2013 at 4:41 pm
mistaken_laughter PLATINUM, Alvin, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are three rules to writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are." W. Somerset Maugham

It manages to tell a story in just a few lines. Awesome! :)

on Apr. 15 2013 at 1:13 pm
7_Ambitions GOLD, Bronx, New York
11 articles 0 photos 11 comments
Amazing poem , i love the flow , and structure

on Apr. 13 2013 at 4:18 pm
ZaZaGoober BRONZE, Hayward, California
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel
Because those who matter don't mind
And those who mind dont matter







- Doctor Seuss

I think this poem is beautifully written and I wish it were longer. Keepp up the great work!