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Smile

March 18, 2013
By ArmyChick SILVER, Lake Park, Florida
ArmyChick SILVER, Lake Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
*Live like its your last day,*People say practice makes perfect, but then they say there is no such thing as perfect, thats why i stopped practicing,*silly boys trucks are for girls,*you dont want to get to your distination and not remember the trip.


Smile when you are alone,
Smile when you want to cry,
When your at home
with that knife held to your neck.
Just think and remember you are loved.
Remember my smile and smile again.

Smile when your happy,
Smile on a cloudy day.
Just don't take that pill,
that one last pill.
I've said it before and I'll say it again,
I love you and I always will.



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on Mar. 23 2013 at 11:16 pm
butnowamfound BRONZE, Richardson, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Psalm 73:24-26
Your wisdom will be my guide, and later you will put me in a place of honour. Whom have I in heaven but you? and having you I have no desire for anything on earth. My flesh and my heart are wasting away: but God is the Rock of my heart and my eternal heritage.

Romans 10:14-15
But how can they call on him to save them unless they believe in him? And how can they believe in him if they have never heard about him? And how can they hear about him unless someone tells them? ....That is why the Scriptures say, “How beautiful are the feet of messengers who bring good news!”

There is a lot of good material in this poem. I did feel that your syntax was a little weak. But great job!