Ripped Apart | Teen Ink

Ripped Apart

March 8, 2013
By Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
23 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear, but Fear itself." -F.D.R.

I'll sit next to the pyre
Of my long lost love.
My heart will burst into fire,
As I watch the ashes fly away like a dove.

She was all I had,
She was my whole heart.
It wasn't like a fad,
'Cuz now my heart's ripped apart.

All I wanted was her love,
I would have given her the world.
She fit me like a glove,
As we both twirled.

Our hearts intertwined,
We couldn't be beat.
When they saw us, others would wine,
"God, why can't I have that treat?"

But now she's gone,
No longer do I have my dove.
No longer will I be able to dawn,
That little thing called Love.

Similar Articles


This article has 2 comments.

on Sep. 8 2014 at 10:37 pm
Life_line BRONZE, White Plains, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have"

-Bob Marley

I love it!!! it hides so many more emotions than it shows and i, for one, like that about your poem

on Mar. 26 2013 at 1:34 pm
MariahPotter PLATINUM, Lansing, Michigan
39 articles 8 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We dream in our waking moments, and walk in our sleep.” -scarlett letter

Beautiful :)