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You never noticed That I Was There

March 8, 2013
By Norma Cervantes PLATINUM, West Lafayette, Indiana
Norma Cervantes PLATINUM, West Lafayette, Indiana
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When I would see you in the hallways,
And look at you for a long time,
That meant that I wanted you to say hi,
But you never did,
Or when I sent you a message,
That was meant for you to start a conversation,
But you never did,
When I would dress up and look pretty,
You never noticed,
When I would cry in front of you,
You never cared,
When I tried to be someone else,
You never looked at me and smiled,
Now when I try to move on,
You ask why I changed,
I answered I have someone to share my life with,
And you turned around and said,
I thought that was me.



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on Mar. 18 2013 at 10:06 am
Norma Cervantes PLATINUM, West Lafayette, Indiana
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Thank You guys for your comments....this well help me for the next poem.

on Mar. 11 2013 at 9:31 pm
A.PaigeTurner, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
You think that everybody hates you. You should really stop that.- A Good Friend

This poem makes me feel sad with a hint of understanding, because having been on both sides, I can see the story behind it in clear detail.

on Mar. 11 2013 at 8:27 pm
Orangesummer PLATINUM, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"Even in the midst of winter I found within me an invincible summer."

I loved your peice, especially because it works in from a different viewpoint, too. When I read this, I thought it was something yo wrote about your father, because tht's how I relate to it. I think it's always a good thing when a peice of writing doesn't have one set way that it works, because different people relate to it in different ways. Nice job!

on Mar. 11 2013 at 1:01 pm
Francis.R BRONZE, Elwood, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
" Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain"

IKR i love how i can take all of my anger and frustration out on poems that i write it helps me alot.....

on Mar. 11 2013 at 1:00 pm
Francis.R BRONZE, Elwood, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
" Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain"

I really love this poem i think its one of my favorites :)

on Mar. 11 2013 at 12:09 am
Rebel21 PLATINUM, St. Catharines, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where there is desire, there is gonna be a flame,
Where there is a flame someone's bound to get burned.
Just because it burns doesn't mean you're gonna die,
You've got to get up and try.

Boys are so stupid and annoying I hate it when they catch you off- guard like that! I know exactly what you're talking about its so frustrating! This is an awesome poem, you are able to put all of the annoyed and confused feelings into one thing that is clear and beautiful. Love it!