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First Deer

February 26, 2013
By Logan Kommes BRONZE, Mitchell, South Dakota
Logan Kommes BRONZE, Mitchell, South Dakota
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Beautiful creature
As I saw you were a doe
When you ran,you were a blur

As I watched you from afar
I knew that you would be mine
As you were running from a car

When you turned my way
I thought you would stay away
You never thought you would be slain

My hopes rose as you got closer
I hoped my gun didn't have an error
My dad asked me if I wanted to take her

As I got in my crosshair
I steadied my gun
Bang, blank stare



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