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YOU MADE MY WEAK

February 10, 2013
By crazyShruti BRONZE, Haridwar, New York
crazyShruti BRONZE, Haridwar, New York
4 articles 9 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.


I am lying in my bed with a comfy night set
Still I am feeling uncomfortable
Like something is missing in the air.
I should assume you are not going to call
since you have a tactic schedule.
I don’t think there is any hope for patch up..
I don’t even know – have we ever been together?

Radio is on the chest ,
Pillow under my head is almost wet..
Brimming with anxiety and frustration
drawing nonsense illustrations.
Misunderstanding of the time,
Damn! They are clouding my mind.
Tear drops are racing down on my cheeks
Freak! Why you made me so weak?



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on Apr. 16 2013 at 11:46 pm
crazyShruti BRONZE, Haridwar, New York
4 articles 9 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.

thanks elise :)

on Feb. 19 2013 at 12:21 am
crazyShruti BRONZE, Haridwar, New York
4 articles 9 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.

okay. thanx a ton :) Sadesdd

on Feb. 19 2013 at 12:20 am
crazyShruti BRONZE, Haridwar, New York
4 articles 9 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.

thanks Geena :)

on Feb. 14 2013 at 4:16 pm
SapphireLamour DIAMOND, Omaha, Nebraska
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I feel for your confusion and frustration.

on Feb. 14 2013 at 12:19 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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I like your rhyming ability:) btw- awesome poem

on Feb. 14 2013 at 11:45 am
crazyShruti BRONZE, Haridwar, New York
4 articles 9 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.

haha.. yea i know .. :)

annyAngel said...
on Feb. 14 2013 at 2:02 am
sweet little poem .. reminding me my old days when i  broke up with my ex. may be same has happened with you but don't worry cuz it would be normal :)

on Feb. 13 2013 at 10:09 pm
Positivity_At_Its_Finest DIAMOND, Morrow, Georgia
56 articles 2 photos 148 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a stage, get on it and perform your best act.

this poem made me weak, lol!!!! good job.

on Feb. 13 2013 at 5:35 pm
Roe-Daniels BRONZE, >>>>>>>, Other
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I like it. It's different and keeps you wanting to read more.