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My Enchantress

February 7, 2013
By aqua1252 SILVER, SUNRISE, Florida
aqua1252 SILVER, SUNRISE, Florida
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Black ribbons cascading down,
An elegant frame to her caramel skin.
Deep, mocha eyes, a gate to who she is.
Prolicio, my Enchantress...

Silent in her ways,
She sways with the grace of the
Ocean waves -- midnight waves like her hair,
Gliding beneath the moonlight.
Alleluia, my Enchantress...

Her lips never part.
Her bow, a perfect heart,
Ready to release an arrow,
Like a femme Cupid waiting in the clouds.
Adorantes, my Enchantress...

A key dangling ‘round her neck,
The treasure that unlocks her eyes,
Her gleaming, mysterious, enticing mocha eyes.
Captivantem, my Enchantress...

My mind stirs as her eyes hold my gaze.
My sight cannot be broken.
I am blind of everything,
Except for her eyes.
Prolecto, my Enchantress...

She places her feathery lips to my ear,
Her sweet voice, delicate like a glass figurine,
Whispers, ego te incantabit...
Then disappears beneath the stars.
Redeo, my Enchantress...

Was she only an illusion?
That striking young magus?
No she was not, I know this now;
She has enchanted my being, my soul, my mind
Beatus vos, my Enchantress...

The author's comments:
This was written from the point of view of a male. I had this vision of of this almost magical and enchanting female character that I really wanted to portray, and I thought by making it through the eyes of an enchanted male, it made it stronger in a way (or emphasized that captivating power).

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