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January 23, 2013
By DerpyAngel GOLD, Olivehurst, California
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"Allons-y!" or "I'm the Doctor, just that, the Doctor"

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Low lights
Sharp beats
Heavy beats
And high heat
Dancing close
And strobe flashing
Party vibe
Forever lasting
Cold drinks
Warm lips
Body heat
And drink tips
Lights on
Colors blazing
Room temperature
Quickly raising
DJ spins
A faster song
How could something so right
Be so wrong?
Feels so good
And drunk off the music
Like many others
Here, you lose it.

© Greg K., New Lenox, IL

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