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Faulty Cleaning MAG
August 14, 2008
I had finally gotten you
Out of my head.
I had finally forgotten
Those soulful black eyes
And soft lips.
With chapped hands,
I had stood proud,
Looking over the polished surface
Of my mind.
I had made sure
There was no speck,
No spot,
No clue that you
Were ever
Here
With me
In my paradise.
Blood, sweat, and tears
Cleaned that damned
Floor.
But it looks like
I missed a spot.
© Anonymous
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This article has 15 comments.
anonymouse222 said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 1:28 pm
this is amazing! it caught my attention in the title and first paragraph! and the end! I love it :) "I missed a spot." I relate with this so well...
silentvocal SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 5:10 pm
My favorite part is the last paragragh-I love that-i think its just enough to stick in the reader's head. It really gets you at the end-its like this sarcastic weight with the last liine-love it!
manda_the_random_poet PLATINUM said...
on May. 30 2010 at 11:08 pm
amazing job love the poem..keep writing..it is very true for most people
one_of_a_kind_girl GOLD said...
on May. 9 2009 at 3:16 pm
this is the kinda stuff i write- LOVE IT!
YouCanCallMeSarah said...
on Feb. 23 2009 at 11:37 pm
Very pretty (:
xjustlistenx said...
on Feb. 19 2009 at 10:13 pm
i went through the same thing keep writing ur waesome
SoccerGrl517 SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2009 at 9:37 pm
This is nice..I can relate to it and i like it alot.
Writer4life said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 7:10 pm
This is so good. kEEP WRITING
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