Angel | Teen Ink


October 26, 2012
By chriskabz PLATINUM, Nairobi, Other
chriskabz PLATINUM, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:

With widened eyes I take a look upward,
Some how magical;a sacred expectation,
It is too obvious that my vicinity,
too lame to withstand my expectation.
At a falling star I smile boldly,
I hold a hope,though
I soon will cope,
in the presence of all,
adverse madness and insanity.

Two days later,
I have changed views...

Here, right beside me she sits,
So much warmth evaporates my hurt.
Alas! I am anew
By the occurrence of her countenance;
The personal exposure to thy graceful spirit,
I bask joyfully,happy to be fortunate.
Eventually, I search no more
Now my eyes glare at thy angel before my stare

The author's comments:
The most unfortunate thing about humans is that most of the time we are negative at thoughts and actions but this day as I thought of the beautiful girl seated right next to me I realized that it doesn't have to be that way. Its vital to just for once consider to be positive and that only happens when you fill the heart with love and appreciation for the people that are around you. enjoy the poem:)

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on Jan. 31 2013 at 7:11 pm
loveisntreal GOLD, Arcata, California
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Favorite Quote:
"you live what you've learned." -linkin park

wow this is so i just am pretty much speechless. you are an amazing writer

so_joy SILVER said...
on Nov. 13 2012 at 11:52 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I like very much and enjoyed reading it. It has a lot of emotion-you are a very talented writer. Please check out my work. It would mean a lot.