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I took your love for granite

October 21, 2012
By Annibonny DIAMOND, Evanston, Illinois
Annibonny DIAMOND, Evanston, Illinois
67 articles 38 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes life takes a path that is hard to walk on, so all you have to do is put on your hiking boots.

I took your love for granite
I smashed it against a wall
Your pride in me had vanished
Against that now stained colored wall
Of hearts
And feelings broken
Since all had been thrown away
I had no heart or soul to give
But your heart stayed the same
I took you yourself us for grant it
So now I must hope
That forgiveness doesn’t have an expiration date.
I promise I’ll change

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on Jan. 14 2013 at 11:39 pm
Padoodallee GOLD, Haven, Kansas
13 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw the angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." -Michelangelou

this is really great because you realize you had some fault in the situation. A lot of these poems only blame the other person. Great job. i like the part where you talk about smashing love against the wall and staining it.