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Speaker Of Mind

October 9, 2012
By FallenDreamerGurl SILVER, Tokoroa, Other
FallenDreamerGurl SILVER, Tokoroa, Other
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Quiet is better than the noise,
Just like peace is better than chaos.


A speaker of mind
A lover from heart
In the corner of silence
I was burned from the start.

Does it matter?
Can you see?
How much of a burden its become to me?

On a day so bright,
The blinding white light,
I knew at that moment it was love at first sight.


But my friend you are
and the love turned sour,
I knew that you didn't love me,
Not even in my final hour.



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WR1T3R GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2012 at 12:33 am
WR1T3R GOLD, Bloomfield, New Mexico
10 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Laziness comes from receiving rewards without the effort'

 Wow! I loved it! Reaches those who have experienced anything like it. Very well done. The rhyming not only sounds amazing, but it makes sense. Great Job :) Please read, rate, and comment on my poems if you have the time. Thanks :)

so_joy SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2012 at 9:44 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Wow! Incredible work! You are an AMAZING poet! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! It would mean a lot :) Thanks!

on Oct. 18 2012 at 4:54 pm
FallenDreamerGurl SILVER, Tokoroa, Other
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Quiet is better than the noise,
Just like peace is better than chaos.

Thanks, i was feeling pretty broke up about my friend not liking me, i knew him since primary, were in high school now. we've always been close. then the whole 'final hour part' was inspired by my friend, she's depressed and the love she finds never... sticks?. And i just couldn't bare the thought of losing her. shes more than a friend to me, she's like my own blood sister. Forever <3 :)

on Oct. 15 2012 at 4:58 pm
bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons you make apple juice

i liked it but its sad very power ful