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Will I

August 2, 2012
By Countrygirl565 GOLD, Plymouth, Indiana
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The world is spinning, all I see is black and white.
Tears are falling!
Words aren't coming!
I'm struggling to survive!
Cold with fear,
filled with doubt,
falling, falling to the ground.
Will I live?
Will I die?
Will I survive?

© Dominique D., Ozone Park, NY

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Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 3:23 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
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I think it's a bad thing my first thought was Katniss.... Oh well, this is a great poem, and it captures all the emotions in such a short time period. Well done.
AcidRoses SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 3:23 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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What an amazing poem! I love the last few lines, short but powerful.
AcidRoses SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 3:23 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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What an amazing poem! I love the last few lines, short but powerful.