Breathe | Teen Ink


July 19, 2012
By Kiki_McGee GOLD, Woodstock, Illinois
Kiki_McGee GOLD, Woodstock, Illinois
16 articles 16 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all." - Emily Dickinson

Don't look at me and see.
Look at me and breathe --
Every particle of my being.
No matter the pain
I swirl within;
We are one.

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on Aug. 14 2012 at 9:46 am
RynnTopia SILVER, Needville, Texas
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Once again, fabulous work. Five stars :)

lissa_ GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2012 at 10:40 pm
lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
16 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything."- Suckerpunch
"The purpose of life is to be a better version of yourself."- Lucy Hale

I can relate to this! 5 stars for putting a complicated feeling in a couple lines

on Aug. 9 2012 at 1:51 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

Trippy. I could dig this. I had to read it, like five times. Which is a really good sign. 

on Aug. 8 2012 at 3:47 pm
Ga-GahKayMarie GOLD, Patterson, California
14 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
If there is one word to describe life it is one

Short and sweet :)

on Aug. 3 2012 at 12:09 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Tha was very deep but very short at the same time :) I like it :)