PLUTO | Teen Ink


May 21, 2012
By Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
36 articles 1 photo 77 comments

Pulling rain on my soul
Yanking fire,
Past you roll
Disconnect -are you there?
Where is that voice
Where is that face
I need your eyes
Sublime stare
Escape bolt, evade, or fly
Deny me just deny me
Can’t flee from your craze
Your fancy, urge, and hunger
Not a phase, does not fade- always stays
Urgency, running, your mind- stunning
Light flows bright pupils glare in night
It boils and it blurs there is a surge.
Loop, twist, coil-
Which one will be brave?
Unafraid, take a leap
Send a whirl spinning
Why so high?
Why so fierce?
No calm. No serene
Obsession of Pluto
Pulling this yearning, a longing of strain
Drain my fear- slow this rapid beat
Sweep me off my feet. Please?
I linger while you halt
I wait while you hold--
For trillions of seconds
You used to beckon.
Now the pure, I only can sense.
Only I
Broken dreams- shattered spirit, loss of self
Come down from that place in your head,
Outer space
Distance can be ripped
We may stretch we may reach
Need to touch need to feel- prickly cheeks
Zones of pain, stabbing aches
I sob, I shake
Empty time- alone
Rebirth, but respond
Do not cling, do not wail
I am openness. A trying attempt
Withhold none?
In the stars
Gifts of infinity
We are us, we will be
Engraved by a glimmering blade
Leave. Go. You always hide.
You duck and you bury
Suppress, mask, smuggle
Wish I was the devil.
Uncover, uncloak,
(Peer through nerdy glasses)
Force field of waterfalls
Feels so close
Imagination is doubt.
Go away, DOPE!
We are dead when apart
Cracks begin to show
I am calling
Shine heights. Dare to fly
Holes in your heart from tired joints
Sublime stares are water. Eyes are air
Truth in cores
Dig. Find.
You...through the dust
Imminent strings
Soiled crystal
We are a mirror.
Blushing red
Purple, pink

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This article has 14 comments.

on Jun. 15 2012 at 9:52 pm
iCheeto PLATINUM, Cape Coral, Florida
25 articles 0 photos 61 comments
Whoa.  This is so good, you have such talent.  The topics and words and emotions flowed so perfectly, not just anyone can write a poem like this.  Keep writing, I can't wait to read more.  Usually poems like this don't catch my attention but you did and I loved it, awesome awesome job :D

on Jun. 15 2012 at 4:04 pm
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
36 articles 1 photo 77 comments
Take a guess;)

on Jun. 15 2012 at 2:29 pm
GusMonster SILVER, Winamac, Indiana
8 articles 3 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
mistakes aren't for the weak, they're for the people who are growing.

This is so.. incredible. The figurative language just speaks to me. What was your inspiration? 

Joshua. GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2012 at 1:02 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
10 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

This is really great! 

on Jun. 12 2012 at 10:06 pm
KutieBabyDoll SILVER, Houston, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love isn't a losing game"

It is really great & descriptive I like your poem it made meh think bout my ex :) lol I give your poem 4 stars

on Jun. 10 2012 at 12:18 pm
Dragonfly13 GOLD, Tyngsboro, Massachusetts
13 articles 42 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always do what you are afraid to do." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

This is really great!!! I can tell you have an imaginative/creative side that when you let wild, can create inspiring pieces of work like this one!!!! Great Job and keep writing!!!!!

on Jun. 10 2012 at 11:30 am
eliana_anastasia11 SILVER, Naperville, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don’t shine so others can see you. Shine so that, through you, others can see Him."

I.LOVE.THIS. this poem makes me think and it makes me have a rollercoaster of emotions! You set the mood perfectly! Your a really good poet!:)

Lizla BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 1:27 am
Lizla BRONZE, Shelter Island, New York
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone struggles against despair, but it always wins in the end. It has to. It's the thing that lets us say goodbye." -Jeffrey Eugenides

I like this a lot! I like how it jumps from a thought to another and touches on different things, yet is an entire piece when put together. Impressive!

Ricky628 said...
on Jun. 7 2012 at 8:01 pm
Ricky628, Mission, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Simply beautiful. Love the structure and symbolism. You recently commented on my poem and Spsaid it was good, but I feel this one is much better. I love it

on Jun. 6 2012 at 6:45 pm
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
36 articles 1 photo 77 comments
Monky, you seem cool. I feel like somebody finally understands my intentional mess of confusion. You should write something! And check out my other poem:)

monky99 said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 6:13 pm
monky99, Concord, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
swiggity swalt pass me the salt

I really like it! The symbolism is shown strongly throughout the peice. I like the random words also, its not completely one organized thought, which i like. :D

MadHater said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 5:14 pm
MadHater, Trophy Club, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The only thing we have to fear is fear itself."
-Abraham Lincoln


"The price of success is responsibility."
-Winston Churchill

Interesting and again, very nice imagery. I advise you again to seperate stanzas, but otherwise very nice. Keep writing.

on Jun. 6 2012 at 5:08 pm
DreamingOutQuiet SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Time and the bell have buried the day,
The black cloud carries the sun away" - Elliot

Oh if life where made of moments, even now and then a bad one. Oh, if life where made of moments then we wouldn't know we had one. - Into the Woods

This is so interesting, I like it alot.

lshem BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 4:35 pm
lshem BRONZE, Burien, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile.\"
- Unknown

Facinating!! i really admire it alot