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Under the Water

May 20, 2012
By Swimmerguy SILVER, N/A, Iowa
Swimmerguy SILVER, N/A, Iowa
8 articles 3 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loving someone doesnt need a reason. If you can explain why you love someone, its not called "love"... Its called "like".


Have you ever been under the water?
Have you ever seen the world from this point of view?
Wouldn't you like to?
You slowly walk in the water, feel how it slowly wraps around your feet, the coolness of its touch.
You keep walking in as the water soon reaches you waist.
You shiver as the water feels colder now, but you enjoy the feeling.
Soon the water is at your neck.
You feel how the is wrapping itself around you, you move your hands around feeling the water move with them.
You take a breath and go under the water, feeling the water rush through your hair and over your eyes.
You slowly open your eyes under the water, don't worry, it won't hurt.
Now look around
look at how the rays of light streak in and change every second under the water.
Notice the clear blue surroundings
Now look up.
Notice how the scenery is never the same at one time, how it always changes the perspective of the world above you.
So now I ask you, have you been under the water?
Well now you know what its like to be under the water.


The author's comments:
There's things in this world you have to do before leaving it, I believe this is one of them.

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Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2013 at 2:28 pm
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

This one is very different n nice. Good job :) :) :)

on Oct. 29 2012 at 7:29 pm
Swimmerguy SILVER, N/A, Iowa
8 articles 3 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loving someone doesnt need a reason. If you can explain why you love someone, its not called "love"... Its called "like".

Why i thank thee madam for thine comment.

Louisiana GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2012 at 1:29 pm
Louisiana GOLD, Waterloo, Iowa
16 articles 2 photos 12 comments

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"I have sometimes been widley, despairingly, acutley miserable, racked with sorrow, but through it all I still know quite certainly that just to be alive is a grand thing" Agatha Christie

lovlely dear!

on Jul. 10 2012 at 4:10 pm
loveliza1111 BRONZE, Hope, Rhode Island
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The world may be broken, but hope is not crazy." ~John Green

lovely... :)

samj97 SILVER said...
on Jul. 8 2012 at 10:19 am
samj97 SILVER, Deerfield, New Hampshire
9 articles 5 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It dosnt matter how many times you fell, it matters how many times you got up"

i like this