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Why Is It

April 17, 2012
By Forever-Wishing GOLD, N\A, Rhode Island
Forever-Wishing GOLD, N\A, Rhode Island
19 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no time to be timid, you must be bold, daring!"


Why is it,
That when a heart breaks;
It makes no sound?
Why is it,
That when one needs a shoulder to cry on;
They feel no one is around?

Why is it,
That one needs wings to fly?
Or needs to be popular;
To like a guy?

Why is it,
People judge what's on the outside?

why is it,
These are the questions people hide?


The author's comments:
I wrote a poem kind of like this called "The Teenage Truth" but it didn't seem to get what I wanted it to. i think this one does. I really want to hear from you!

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on Sep. 19 2012 at 6:48 pm
Forever-Wishing GOLD, N\A, Rhode Island
19 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no time to be timid, you must be bold, daring!"

Thank you, Paige, that is very nice of you to say. But, sorry for making you cry! :D
 

Paige4699 GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2012 at 5:55 pm
Paige4699 GOLD, Jackson, Rhode Island
11 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.

Oh my gosh Casey, it's so beautiful :) And it's so true. I cried :) (Paige from school xD)

on May. 6 2012 at 2:35 pm
Forever-Wishing GOLD, N\A, Rhode Island
19 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no time to be timid, you must be bold, daring!"

I'm glad you liked it, and I am thrilled it reached you. Thanks a bunch!

on May. 5 2012 at 11:04 pm
xXSpyderGyrlXx GOLD, N/A, Rhode Island
17 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can lead a horse to water, but you can not make him drink" - anonymous

i found this the best of all forever. it really reached out to me

on Apr. 23 2012 at 8:08 pm
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!

on Apr. 23 2012 at 6:33 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

OOOOOOOooooo!!! This was so good. I read it like, twice. I LOVE poems w/ comnstant themes and such. GOOD JOB!! 5/5 stars!!

on Apr. 23 2012 at 6:27 pm
Forever-Wishing GOLD, N\A, Rhode Island
19 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no time to be timid, you must be bold, daring!"

You really think so? Thank you SO much, and I plan to add more poetry soon!

on Apr. 23 2012 at 6:26 pm
Forever-Wishing GOLD, N\A, Rhode Island
19 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no time to be timid, you must be bold, daring!"

Thank you very much, this means a lot to me! :D

on Apr. 23 2012 at 3:19 pm
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
13 articles 1 photo 47 comments
loved it forever and its so true :D

on Apr. 23 2012 at 3:12 pm
Kailey.Nicole GOLD, Bethlehem, Georgia
14 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In Love, if Love be Love, if Love be ours,
Faith and Unfaith can never be equal powers" Lord Alfred Tennyson in the poem 'All in All'

Wow, This Poem is beyond amazing. There are so many hidden messages in it. I really love your work. Hope for you to post more soon ! :DD