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Grim Reaper.

April 18, 2012
By dark_stars96 SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
dark_stars96 SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"You cant hate some one whose dead" Kerosene by Miranda Lambert

My soul is mine to keep

Grim this is one you will not reap hold my soul very near

You are one I do not fear

Don't touch my soul or that of my family

You give so little and take so much

Ill send out the dogs and wait for the fatal crunch

Do we have an understanding you and I

And Grim don't even try to lie

My soul is mine to keep

So Grim go find another place to reap

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Hannabug GOLD said...
on Sep. 11 2012 at 8:54 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

Love this!!! :)

Lizla BRONZE said...
on May. 20 2012 at 7:12 pm
Lizla BRONZE, Shelter Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone struggles against despair, but it always wins in the end. It has to. It's the thing that lets us say goodbye." -Jeffrey Eugenides

I like your use of rhyming. Sometimes rhyming doesn't work and makes the poem sound elementary, but it certainly works in this piece. It's succinct, but none less effective. Great poem!