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Bubble gum

April 5, 2012
By Emjolie8 GOLD, Evanston, Illinois
Emjolie8 GOLD, Evanston, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The most wasted of all days is one without laughter.

Life is 
Like a piece of 
Bubble gum
At the beginning 
it is sweet
and has
But at times 
It has no flavor 
And becomes bitter.

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on Apr. 19 2012 at 12:15 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

You might like to revise this. It's straight to the point but maybe you could use a little deeper words and take your time choosing your words. This might be a great poem if you revise it...