Heartbroken | Teen Ink


February 26, 2012
By koala_song BRONZE, Pitttsburgh, Pennsylvania
koala_song BRONZE, Pitttsburgh, Pennsylvania
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

I had the best
but I let him go
I didn't know what I wanted.
He carried me when I fell,
knew something was wrong whenever I said I was okay
never looked at another girl when he was with me
and no matter what, always said
What kind of a person,
lets their true love go?
I got tired of never being able to see him...
so I said, it's over
I cried like I never cried before.
You may think it's crazy...
but it's true.
I'm that girl who's had more boyfriends then she can count...
yet, this one boy has me running in circles.
I can't get him out of my head.
He's going out with my best friend.
there's nothing harder than watching the guy you still love,
kiss and pronounce love to someone else...

The author's comments:
This is about my ex-boyfriend...John. The poem, "meeting you",was about him...God I love him. the only reason why I let him go is because I loved him too much...and it scared me how much I needed him.
Please leave a comment...or advice...thanks :)

Similar Articles


This article has 2 comments.

on Mar. 10 2012 at 12:00 pm
juliam PLATINUM, Windermere, Florida
21 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of us learn to write in second grade. Most of us go on to greater things

hey, this was really good :) The only thing I thought could have been better was the transition... the emotion is strong in the end, but not as strong in the begining, does that make sense?


But the ending was superb, good job! :)

on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:41 pm

WOW that was....AWESTRIKING!!!!! why did you let him go???? YOu must really miss him...huh?

good luck :) I hope it works out between you two.