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Under the Influence of You

January 31, 2012
By caitiekate GOLD, Hopkinton, New Hampshire
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"Do what you want, not what you can." --Me

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I cannot think; unless I think of you,
I cannot breathe; without your warm breath on mine,
I cannot see; until I look into your clear green eyes,
I cannot hear; unless your soothing voice is harmonizing to our song,
I cannot feel; without your fingertips trembling my skin to rubber,
I cannot smell; unless my nose is pressed against the sweet curve of your neck,
I cannot live; until your body is curled next to mine,
I would die without you.

© Lauren R., Edmond, OK

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