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The Moon

January 12, 2012
By AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.

To make up this morning
I couldn’t think of another way
It was a seriously bad day
For the moon that cried its final fall
The stars and space mourned for all
Little girl, little girl what do you see?
As she sat there, all alone, crying
And whispered, “The Moon is dying”
Is this was how it was suppose to be
The midnight sun falling from the sky
How will she sing her lullaby?
This day could be a many worse
But now it feels as a devil’s curse
Lost as the light is now forbidden
To be done, can we be forgiven?
It was a serious day
And I needed to find my way

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Regan PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:43 pm
Regan PLATINUM, Vicksburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
there's no such thing as impossible for the word itself says im possible.

love the rhymes! :) u did very well!! BRAVO! never stop writing!!

Momo1995 GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 12:12 pm
Momo1995 GOLD, East Elmhurst, New York
15 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Through the thick gloom of the present I see the brightness of the future." -Daniel Webster

really good :)

on Jan. 18 2012 at 7:22 pm
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau

this was a very interesting piece. it took what we all know in our hearts, and from what the moons natural beauty is. this tells a story as well as expressing feelings. well done :)