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our love

January 11, 2012
By jusc44 BRONZE, Ankeny, Iowa
jusc44 BRONZE, Ankeny, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
you only have one life, live it

Running down my face so cold
You yelled at me so bold
Every day the same
Beautiful blue purple and black on my body
Red running down my back
This is love

No one’s love is the same
Mine is unconventional
He always says sorry
He always says he loves me
So romantic
A little on edge

He was everything to me
No one could keep me away
He got out of hand
That’s ok
He loves me
He came to say good bye
In the grave I feel his love

No love is the same
Our love is a little unconventional

The author's comments:
This poem is about a friend who swore her boyfriend loved her, until he went to far and killed her. Never once did she think what he was doing was wrong, but it was and is.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Feb. 1 2012 at 10:48 pm
Jessica. SILVER, Lynwood, California
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Favorite Quote:
Call no man happy 'till he is dead

Wow i loved it

on Jan. 12 2012 at 2:17 pm
ch33rleader BRONZE, Caledonia, Minnesota
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I like it! it shows how people really think.