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Leave Me Be, Dad

January 4, 2012
By IdentityMangler PLATINUM, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
IdentityMangler PLATINUM, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
34 articles 3 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be kind. You never know whose fighting for their life.


I don't like you, Dad.
You left me here with Mom and Brother for nine years without a word.
Needless to say, I dislike you.

You came back.
I don't want you back.
At first t was nice to fave a father around.
Now you just wanna stay here.

I don't want you here.
I don't like you here.
Leave me be, Dad.
Just go away.

You're just so persistant, aren't you, Dad?
When will you know I don't need you?
A girl wants her father when they are small to teach them.
Momma Finished the teaching. You're only watching what she and I made.

You're a terrible father.
You're a coward.
You're not fir to be called Dad.
Then I'll call you by a name you deserve.

No, not your name James.
No, never again will I call you Dad or even father.
To me your name is Coward.

And it always be.
So Leave me be, Coward.
I want nothing to do with you.
Ever


The author's comments:
My dad left for nine years with no call or any type of communication.

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on Feb. 18 2012 at 7:09 pm
silentpeacock BRONZE, Whitney, Texas
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all it takes is all youve got

wow very emotional! i read your profile, and I am slightly obsessed with eyes. will you have someone take a picture of your eyes and post it?

on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:16 pm
IdentityMangler PLATINUM, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
34 articles 3 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be kind. You never know whose fighting for their life.

Why thank you :)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 9:11 pm
Alechcim SILVER, Plano, Texas
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"There's no such thing as impossible, the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn
"Be the change you wish to see in the world.- Ganhdi
"I have no failed, I've just found 10,000 ways that don't work." -Thomas Edison

Good job! It's very realistic:) Keep up the good writing!