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Invisible

January 1, 2012
By shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
We must become the change we want to see
-Mahatma Gandhi


Stereotypical and conceited
So unfair and they don't even see it
Stuck behind a curtain
A world so dull and bleak
Unable to behold the potential
Plainly visible where they don't see.

The author's comments:
I was recently unable to be a part of my school's reading extension class and there is no explaining how much I miss being there with my friends doing what we love, reading. This poem helps explain my frustration, however. Although, most of my friends feel the same way on account of the extension class becoming more "exclusive".

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2012 at 7:06 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great! Very powerful. You can truly feel your anger with your harsh language.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


on Jan. 7 2012 at 2:01 pm
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
We must become the change we want to see
-Mahatma Gandhi

Thank you very much!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 1:57 pm
maizyiscrazy GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
10 articles 53 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in kissing, kissing a lot. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe in miracles. ~Audrey Hepburn

This is really good :) Awesome job expressing your feelings!

AvaJay GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 9:42 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
13 articles 4 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.
~ Tagore

WOW! Short, strong, and just plain amazing! Love it!

on Jan. 4 2012 at 8:14 pm
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had...."
-Tears of Fears-Mad World

Hey Its Gabbie :) this is great js