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Hold On Forever
December 23, 2011
When you told me
i prayed for you
When i heard you say the words you said and the sadness in your eyes
I knew as your friend i had to help and hold on to you
Don't give up because of your mistake
Don't be sad because of what people might says
because i will hold on to you forever
Don't give in to the responsibility of what your gonna
have
because i am here
Don't slip away
Because i will hold you here and i won't let you slip
I am here and will hold on to you Forever
© Lindsey D., Marblehead, MA
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This article has 4 comments.
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 3:43 pm
a couple of little errors...nothing a short proofreading wouldn't fix
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 3:41 pm
Incredibly sweet, and it flows beautifully! Your friend is very lucky to have your friendship :)
Plain-Jane ELITE said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 8:22 pm
lovely poem and from the heart! just a few spelling errors "says" should be "say" and "your" "you're". i can tell you really love your friend and that makes an amazing poem
