My Soul's Crying

December 7, 2011
By AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.


When I was five
you told me that whenever it rained
that it was my soul crying
I asked "How Mommy?"
You said that my soul was so huge that if I'd drown
in my tears
now looking at your grave
I remember that day perfectly
'cause I can't seem to cry now
so I'll leave it to my soul
I look up at the cloudy gray sky
and watch my first tear drop down from the sky
I watch the rest falling down so hard
I remember that day
I remember this day
My soul is crying pleading for you
My tears follow too


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem for really no particular reason but for some reason my best friend loved it out of all my poems I have. I love my friend and this is for her.

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on Apr. 9 2014 at 10:43 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

U have a unique and beautiful style of writing! Keep on writing!

.king. SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2012 at 9:47 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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Very good Amie, Cute and lovely :) 4/5

on Oct. 24 2012 at 9:44 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

What is Iowans??

on Oct. 24 2012 at 9:38 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

Iowans? I have no idea. :P@GG

on Oct. 23 2012 at 5:23 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

Amie!! I do... if you knew about Iowans, everyy girl and boy has one! :D I'm just saying good luck. :)

on Oct. 23 2012 at 9:30 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

Thank you. XD

on Oct. 23 2012 at 9:29 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

Trust me I will. Or maybe your saying that because you don't have a #. Your just a little boy. :P Thanks anyway. XD

on Oct. 22 2012 at 1:36 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

Hello! :) I like your stuff a lot! P.S. You said you'd get me to tell you my #.. darling, ain't gonna happen. :D

Blaque SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:43 am
Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
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poems that come from the heart of the randomist times are sometimes the ones that truely matter.

on Oct. 9 2012 at 9:03 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Love it :-) really cute x more poems like these please

Hannabug GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2012 at 11:53 am
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

I LOVE THIS!!!

on Oct. 1 2012 at 9:46 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Poignant!love it!

on Sep. 15 2012 at 6:39 am
PaigeMathis BRONZE, Oxford, Other
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All God does it watch us and kill us when we get boring, we must never, ever be boring."

This is really really good! I loved it. Well done :)

alex said...
on Sep. 13 2012 at 2:48 pm
nice stuff

on Mar. 30 2012 at 2:21 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2217 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Oh my goodness! This is so... Poetic! I love this, love this, love this!


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