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Departure

November 26, 2011
By Ella1 GOLD,
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments

A bee escapes its hive
a bird flies from its flock
a wolf wonders from its pack
a fish swims from its school
a puppy abandons its litter
I leave the throng to which I belong
the question is










how to start?


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on Jan. 28 2012 at 7:56 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Simple and nice, but i dont say its ur best....... keep writing!!

on Jan. 13 2012 at 8:28 pm
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
28 articles 13 photos 66 comments
i realize that you have a tendency to do the last line a few lines down. I guess that's just your style :)

Annette11 GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 4:44 pm
Annette11 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Thanks so much (:

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 4:36 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thank you, I read one of your poems too. It was amazing!

Annette11 GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 1:52 pm
Annette11 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
11 articles 24 photos 18 comments
Very short but good! A more developed piece would probably attract more attention, but you seem like a very talented author!


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