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The Stars Will Bow Down To Me... And The Heavens Shall Be Mine !

November 25, 2011
By Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments

Time and tide wait for none
Shall not be the case of mine,
What Kings and Queens have failed to acieve
Once will all be mine .
Many times fallen a Warrior i am ,
Always striving and trying
Powers of Tide will be vested in me ,
As i shall command the Time !

Crowd has marked my grave on earth,
Toussled me with my past
Mere mortals dont know that ,
I have overcane my past.
Though my spirit has lost many battles,
It's not my spirit that is lost
Like a 'WALKING DEAD' i will tear through my grave
My spirit shall rekindle again !

The time is here, the time is now,
Shouts my spirit awaken
A lot is there that has to be done There is no point in waiting .
Like a 'DEAD' man 'WALKING' again,
I will once again face the world

The author's comments:
Last year my team had lost the very first match of our Inter School State Level Basketball tournament under my Captaincy and i was blamed for it by my schoolmates . My coach was the only person who supported me and inspired me . This poem was what i wrote after that . This year not only my team won the tournament but also qualified for the Nationlals under my Captaincy . i even won the MVP for scoring 78 points in 4 matches !

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This article has 7 comments.

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 4:13 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Nice poem, but I'll be honest I think I like ur story better than this one, Keep writing I'll be back !

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:20 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

i loved it so beautifully written and inspired!!!!

cookiestar said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 7:58 am
This is a great poem, a great choice of words. It is beautifully written:).

butterfly123 said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 3:35 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
0 articles 0 photos 408 comments
beautiful poem! you are every good with words!

ToryZoe GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 10:19 pm
ToryZoe GOLD, Norwalk, Connecticut
11 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"who you are is what you have done;
who you will be is what you do now"
said by buhhda

good use of words and relay of a positve message but put in a greater way then just "next time will be better" and very proud. I love it 5/5

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 10:26 pm
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments

thanx traceyacey !!!


on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:40 pm
Traceyacey GOLD, Eagleville, Pennsylvania
16 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont you ever let a soul in the world tell you you cant be exactly who you are. -lady Gaga
Lady Gaga is so fn awesome she supports us emotionally everyday cause your on the right track baby you were born this way.

the wording pullls you in very good 5/5