abyss | Teen Ink


November 23, 2011
By nomad GOLD, Homewood, Alabama
nomad GOLD, Homewood, Alabama
10 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
“What a treacherous thing it is to believe that a person is more than a person.” John Green

Reaching into the empty abyss
Reaching towards the light
The light of an empty hope
A hope for a new start
An escape from this black, lifelessness
Reaching for the only hope, visible among the stars
White specs among the black voids of pain
Pain of the past
The empty past, the past of an empty shell
The shell of a lifeless soul
A soul of a broken heart

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on Jan. 28 2012 at 10:43 pm
denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"There are far, far better things ahead than any we leave behind." -C.S. Lewis

It's very beautifully written, but I can't get it.

on Jan. 20 2012 at 11:21 pm
EmilyMadi25 BRONZE, Fishers, Indiana
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This was amazing! keep writing poems you're really good!

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 2:54 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
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this was great!!

I.N.K said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 3:41 pm
I.N.K, Hoover, Alabama
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"never confuse what is impossible with what hasn't been done yet"

-Ryan Doyle

i like it, it has alot of emotion