Beautiful

November 11, 2011
By AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.


you're so beautiful
I can't take my eyes off of you
your light green eyes
your crooked smile
rosy cheeks
freckles
the way your brown hair flows down over your eyes
the way your name sounds whenever I say it
you're so beautiful
yet you choose her
even though she could never love you as much as I do


The author's comments:
This poem is very personal to me. One of my very first I've written. About someone I've really have grown close to. Sadly, we're separated now but it's alright.

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on Oct. 23 2012 at 9:38 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

Thanks for the advice. I'm a girl but that's ok. :P

Blaque SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:36 am
Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
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I love it.. Describe it more to your best of outcome or do you want to wait until it really matters?.. Tell them how beautiful she is compare her to the good things make her know that she is more special than anything ... I think that's what should show.. But i don't know ... I still love it  

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:33 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

It feels so real. And I can totaly relate.

on Mar. 30 2012 at 2:16 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Beautiful, I love your description!

on Mar. 30 2012 at 1:52 pm
M2coolTodd PLATINUM, Clarksdale, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
" A day without laughter, is a day wasted."
" Embrace your awesomeness!"

IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PRETTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:35 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 132 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

I really like this poem becuase it doens't describe the usual idea of beauty, the character described is different looking. The ending is also really sad, overall a nice poem!

on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:35 pm
KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I figure life is a gift and I don't intend on wasting it. You don't know what hand you're gonna get dealt next. You learn to take life as it comes at you...to make each day count."

Good job (: I love descriptions like you used, it makes me feel more in depth with the story behind the poem.

KShep12 GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 3:45 pm
KShep12 GOLD, Lake Butler, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It isn't where you came from, its where you're going that counts." -Ella Fitzgerald

This is good.

on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:15 am
ToxicLove SILVER, Hunh, Other
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep"

-Robert Frost

Well it took me 3 years....i reallly truely was in luv.....well if it gets too hard then try listening to sum taylor swift songs when u r sad.....and some avril lavigne song when u r angry.......

on Nov. 29 2011 at 3:49 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

thanks I wrote this when I was getting to know the person I am talking about he's amazing.

on Nov. 29 2011 at 2:06 pm
iamonecoolradiator, London, Other
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the poem is just completely true and right and accurate..

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 12:30 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments

it was so emotional! great job!

 


on Nov. 29 2011 at 11:58 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

thanks so much I'm still not over it. Sadly does it ever stop hurting?

on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:58 am
ToxicLove SILVER, Hunh, Other
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep"

-Robert Frost

This iz a really lovely poem.....very sweet and heartbreaking.....well the same ting happeed to me sum years ago....

on Nov. 28 2011 at 12:26 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

Thank you so much!

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 6:49 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments
hey it's really nice and even though i am a boy , it reaaly relates to my life ... loved it <3<3<3<3<3<3 !!

on Nov. 27 2011 at 4:47 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

I love the meaning behind this poem.  The rhythm is excellent this time and my only criticism is the punctuation and capitalization.  Keep writing! :)

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:43 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

It is about a guy. lol

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:39 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

i love when girls refer to guys as beautiful (im assuming its about a guy. i could be wrong. sry if i am) it adds to the intensness (lol new word)

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:33 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

thank you so much


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