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Robots

September 25, 2011
By Ella1 GOLD,
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments

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Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 1:06 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thanks callie15 :)

on Jan. 21 2012 at 11:53 pm
callie15 BRONZE, North Plains, Oregon
3 articles 21 photos 424 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I dreamed I was a butterfly, flitting around in the sky; then I awoke. Now I wonder: Am I a man who dreamt of being a butterfly, or am I a butterfly dreaming that I am a man?"
-Chuang Tzu

"No man with a good car needs to be justified!"
-Wise Blood

I agree with Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful. Poems that often times appear basic actually takes a lot of time: if one word seems out of place, you have to rethink the whole poem over again. Love the poem, Ella1!

on Jan. 14 2012 at 8:38 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
40 articles 2 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

Thank you. :)

Ella1 GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 12:37 pm
Ella1 GOLD,
14 articles 7 photos 137 comments
Thanks Lilac, I read some of your work to and it is AMAZING!

on Jan. 13 2012 at 8:10 pm
Choosing2Live4Christ PLATINUM, Wausaukee, Wisconsin
28 articles 13 photos 66 comments
hehe this made me laugh :P I want a robot now :D

on Nov. 16 2011 at 10:48 pm
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful PLATINUM, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
40 articles 2 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons make grape juice. Then sit back and watch everyone look at you in amazement. :)

Actually, stuff like this often takes a LONG time to get right. It's great, btw. :)

-Lilac


on Nov. 15 2011 at 11:31 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
16 articles 0 photos 124 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life." -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)
"You don't have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body" - CS Lewis

OOOooooooo!!! Kinda reminds me of the story I'm writing. . .

 


IRUEHL SILVER said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 6:51 pm
IRUEHL SILVER, Deland, Florida
5 articles 2 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who start wars, never fight them
And those who fight wars, they never like them
And those who write laws, can recite them
And those who fight laws, they live and die by them

haha looks like it took you 6 seconds :/


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