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Am I All Alone?

October 23, 2011
By Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss


May I vanish
Into the night?
Where there is not a soul
In sight.

Maybe I’ll finally find,
A place with a gleaming white light.

Alone,
As always.
Solemn as can be,
Is someone willing,
To remove me from
My misery?

I see you in the distance.
Not a step you move.
If no one can save me
What more do I have to lose?



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on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:40 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

YOur work is amazing. Please keep on writing.

on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:09 pm
kel_the_shell, Ronks, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve." - The Perks of Being a Wallflower

this is really good!!!! I love it!

Loftus GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 1:38 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

Sunshine than means so much! Thanks a lot!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 9:46 am
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

I love this poem! This one is super good. :) My favorite of yours so far. I love how it's short, but says so much. Not too many people can do that. Your one of the few extremely talented ones. :))

on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:19 pm
Mynameislindsayy SILVER, Seattle, Washington
7 articles 8 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather just except who I am, what's the use of trying to change?"

I loved it! keep writting plese

on Nov. 12 2011 at 6:48 pm
Ellabell PLATINUM, Columbia, Missouri
21 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have not yet begun to fight!"
John Paul Jones

the last stanza is the best.

Br33na GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 11:22 pm
Br33na GOLD, Dexter, Oregon
13 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is beautiful, but sometimes we forget what Life is an mix it up* but life is Life, The most beautiful thing you can remember :) - Me <3

amazeing !!!!! :)))))))

on Oct. 31 2011 at 10:05 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
24 articles 4 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you" Tyler Durden Fight Club

I like this one too. It's so honest and true. I love how you say 'May I vanish Into the night? Where there is not a soul In sight" Really good writing.