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Brick wall

October 1, 2011
By gabsgarcia PLATINUM, Hillsborough, New Jersey
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Be true to yourself

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She was a cold brick wall
That no one could ever break
No matter how hard they tried to chip or smash
The force of the wall was just too strong
Until that one day when
That special boy came along
And only he could break down that brick wall and see what was inside
She had only let a few people take a look inside
But of course that brick wall would be up once again
This time the wall didn’t come back
Instead it stayed down
She was no longer the cold brick wall
She was herself

© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA

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